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Remember You Sleeping

In this velvet
silence of night
almost turning into day –
I can hear your voice,
see us talking, laughing,
remember you sleeping —
me tenderly watching
you breathe
in soft rhythm —
as I waited
for those first rays of light –
the rooster crowing,
the birds singing —
I roll to hold you
warm with sleeping,
one last time,
before the morning comes
brightly shinning
burning the memory away.

~South Carolina, 2011


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ARTWORK: Love’s Dream Fulfilled by Jindra Noewi. You can find this piece and others here. More information on the artist here. Or, visit her website at: http://noewisart.com/wordpress/

11 responses to “Remember You Sleeping”

  1. Thanks so much to all of you for reading and for the loving, kind comments. Blessings always to each of you!

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  2. This is lovely, soft, and romantic =)

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  3. Dear Marissa

    Its lovely… and I could relate to this one very much…. your words are beautiful and lovely. You really painted your whisper well..

    ॐ नमः शिवाय
    Om Namah Shivaya
    http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.com/2011/07/whispers-memories-to-live-by.html

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  4. Wonderfully and vividly descriptive!! Such sweetness of the night turning into a new dawn ~~

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  5. dreamy,
    well done.
    Happy Potluck.

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  6. Lovely word images to go along with the lovely picture.

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  7. beautiful …thank you

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  8. Beautiful, dreamy … I like the image you chose for this one Marissa!

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    1. Thank you. I thought it very fitting, emotionally vivid and it worked with the poem. They have such wonderful artists and beautiful art at the site (http://www.fineartamerica.com)

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